You should try a little more frame by frame animation better editing timing was bad and it was just awkward silence for the last few seconds. not entirely sure if you even drew the polar bear, if you did, you are a WAAaaaaaaay better artist than animator which I rarely see. Also the audio wasn't good at all. you need a better mic.
Polar Intervention
Polar bear intervention of Santa ending Christmas as we knew it.
MAXTRAXarts responds:
Thank you for your comments. I did draw the picture for last years Christmas cards and just moved the mouth and limbs and put each frame as I tried to match up mouth with that awful audio. This was my first animation and am working on another that I am taking my time to fix what I am learning on the way. I really do appreciate your advice. I agree totally.lol
Looks more like a crappy e card to me. Didnt enjoy this one to be honest
MAXTRAXarts responds:
well, thank you for your honesty. Are you sure you just aren't too upset that Santa is dead? lol
it will be ok .
i really love the polar bear how he devoured Santa! Also love your drawing style. Very good for your first attempt at animation. keep designing and animating.
MAXTRAXarts responds:
thank you very much you are very kind.
You should really invest in a new microphone, the sound quality is pretty bad. The art is fine.
I think its a bit choppy frame wise, I like it. A bit of audio problems. Over all okay. But could be better.
MAXTRAXarts responds:
thank you this was my very first one and I am learning some valuable lessons along the way. I appreciate the feedback.
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