A few critiques. The biggest criticism I have is that the graphics where not that well drawn. It does look like there was a fair amount of effort put into them but if you spend like a half hour or so more on them, I believe they could improve a lot. Try looking at pictures of what you're trying to draw, look for little things like coloring, shapes and sizes of the bodies. The voice acting sounded good, it was passable. The move also gave me a chuckle, which I always enjoy. Anyways, hang in there, you look like you've got potential to do better. Keep up the good work!
Thanks so much for your thoughtful critique! I will definitely take these points into consideration as I try to improve as an animator. Thanks for watching!
This is actually quite enjoyable! Well done! :)
Thank you! I'm still experimenting with this style so I'm glad you enjoyed it!