Well, I had most fun doing this one... Because it got completely transformed... from the backgrounds, changing the body type of Mr Albino... (who has been coughing in my system for one full month. :D )... As always the cool ideas and suggestions... gave this piece... a completely different atmosphere and feel...!!!
I even figured out some Design techniques.!!!
Audio source : The Princess Bride 1987
So what u guys think?? Please critique...
Like what you did with the camera man! Nice work. The characters could use a bit of work, and although this is a bit unrelated, you should take out the "experimental logo" text. The logo itself is pretty cool, you can change it whenever you'd like anyways so keeping it there seems like a note for yourself, not the viewer. Lastly, nice smoke fx at the beginning!
Thank you Mabelma..!!!
good animation, however the voice acting isn't something to be desired
Thank you very much..!! The audio clip is from a movie.. The Princess Bride 1987.
I like the fluent style of your Animation and I think its pretty funny, buuuut to give you some critique.... even though it was hard to find something, I think the last camerapan was a little unneeded, you could have made a whole bodyshot then it wouldn't be so shaky (maybe the wrong word here but the shot before was slowly zooming in and then there is this quick cut and a quick pan up, that feels a little rough to watch, maybe you could have made a static shot just on the upper body..^^)
Buuut after all, very solid animation style, good lipsync and nice gigglemoment, cant stop watching it :D
4.5/5 :)
looking foreward to your next piece, you good sir are getting a follower !
Even i was not satisfied with the camera effects... It does feel... not smooth/sudden movements..!! Thank you for the cool tips...!!! :)