Not bad. Not a huge fan of the story but besides the animation was pretty descent and the music and audio were synced up pretty good. The lines and textures need cleaning up. What I think I like most about this was the old school animation, for example the running on the spot and the eye popping were bang on and reminded me of a few 90's cartoons.
Halloweeners
Meant to get this done in time for Halloween. That worked out wonderfully, didn't it? I liked it too much to just scrap it like 99% of my projects, so I just said fuck it and finished it. So here you go, a 15 day late Halloween short.
Did not like the animation style, or even what is was about.
I do like the fact that you keep trying, in the long run you have far more accomplished in this area than many of the people on here.
Just because I did not like the submission, doesn't mean I don't like you.
Good luck
NoahSegura responds:
Thanks, I appreciate the criticism. :) Will keep trying
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3.37 / 5.00
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Daily 5th Place November 16, 2015
