Ok multiple problem here the changing layout is super weird. And There too much randomness here and your art work is like a finger painting while this is a game about a life and how you see it.
This is actully kinda lame but I like the randomness of it. Have you consider using contruct two its a platform game engine and I feel like you could use it here and do alot more stuff with it such as jumping shooting and perhap an inventory. dont get me wrong i love adventure type it just I have no idea what is going on. A brief explanation and a clear goal. To why am i adventuring here what is the purpose of this game.
I see alot of potential in this game but I see that you are using some old program and I have to ask why did you include Down and UP if you arent going to allow us to use it. And why is the on click space base on the X and Y Coors.
2 star because its original and you have good taste in music.