the dialogue was stale af.

you could just vision you reading out your lines with trouble.
A more natural approach is needed to convince me of the conversation.

Happy now, reviewing is fun, thanks newgrounds for forcing me to reply in order to rate my stars.

this really was constructive, huh.

I just did not like it, the animation, the stale dialogue, the contents of it were equally disintegrating

My soul.

Merry Halloween,

spoopy sk3l3t0n

no star at all.