the camera's kinda shaky, and the characters are clearly ripped off Klay world. maybe try and develop a new style. The animation and pacing are too fast and could be a bit better in general. But It's good to see somebody your age doing something on the internet other than wasting their time on social media. You have potential. A book I recommend the animator's survival kit by Richard Williams. It'll give you good advice on animation and following it might make you better at animating and, in turn, more popular. Reach for the stars kiddo