I was silent for the entire thing, then started laughing. I have no idea why - it wasn't even really funny. Well, good job. xD

You should pitch this to the history channel.

This is pretty cool. I like the story, but the voice acting might need some work. You speak in a monotone a lot, and often you don't enunciate your speech very well. Also, having a narrator for the entire story instead of voice actors for the individual characters kind of dulls the drama IMO. Still, it was a pretty neat idea. ;)