so he is is talking about his life and interests
maybe you could have done more than move the lips and boxing gloves on loop
its not very good
but its a good effort
Movie Promoting Bentframe with a special guest- Mike Tyson. This movie isn't meant to be funny, just to promote bentframe.
so he is is talking about his life and interests
maybe you could have done more than move the lips and boxing gloves on loop
its not very good
but its a good effort
Mike is always entertaining
Lol that was entertaining, i think i remember this movie, the voice clip was pretty good, there is room for some improvments such as the "LOOPING" you can ad a stop action code so it doesnt loop, also the backround needs some color or some scene, you may also want to give some animation to his head have it move around once in awhile, it just sitting there looked odd, but anyways these are just a few ideas, that could improve on this, also one last improvment point might be to have some "SUBTITLES" aswell, but other then those things mentioned, it was kind of amusing, if anything some more jokes could be placed in there, anyways nice effort here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was not hard to understand, but it would be a nice option to have some subtitles, gives the flash just that bit more effort, and incase anything was missed you have the text right there. some more jokes could be in the dialog, the backround needs some color or some scene, you may also want to give some animation to his head have it move around once in awhile, Try and fix that loop, this is an easy provess with some simple action script code, its called a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" now you will also have to add a stop and replay buttons so that the viewer can easily replay you flash aswell
hmmm
Nice voicework, the sound of his voice was hilarious, the drawing was good, but didn't look too much like mike tyson at all, so it kinda lost some of the original intent I think.
What?
Uh, pretty much nothig happened in this flash. The voice of Mike was interesting, but if this is meant to be a promotion as you said, it's a really bad one. The graphic of Mike was okay, but his mouth just stopped movign partway through the flash, and the voice kept going after it got to the end. But really, this doesn't make me want to use Bentframe. It never even mentioned what the hell Bentframe is.
Eh? What was that supposed to be?
Mike Tyson talking, half the time you can't understand what he's saying and then his mouth suddenly stops moving while he's still supposed to be talking, I'm assuming that was supposed to be funny, but I'm not sure, where was the humor?