A couple of glitches. The blocks sometimes makes me go through them.
No story in the beginning then you learn everything in the end so i guess it was still a story.
It was fun and cute. I had many things i wanted to say but then i beat the game and read the story and i was like...."ohhhhhhhhhh i guess that makes sense."
It was good and fun.
I like the music when it comes to the cloud stage and the VHS tape battle.
You beat crabs and clouds and defeat a huge VHS tape. I was only expecting squirrels since you said that in the author comments.
I don't know if i'm stupid but you can't seem to go back to the beginning after the credits.
Oh well good job there

Epona is adorable, as is the way she moves and jumps. The backgrounds of all the levels are nice-looking, although the ground and doors are simple.

The amount of pens, potions, and health aren't showing, and I can't open the log.

Definitely in the early stages, that's for sure. It has a simple concept, but needs polish extremely badly. I mean, it's okay, but a lot of it is just unfinished- nothing a few afternoons of polishing can't fix. Good luck on future games, though!