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Fall'n Lucky

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Made this in 2 weeks so it is pretty rushed, but at least I tried something I've never done before hope you enjoi!

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Yes. You have tried, but keep in mind, real art is not to be rushed.
The story seemed predictable, and it would've been great if you tried to make more time for it.
Animation is averagely done(Noticable, since you stated the whole thing's rushed).

Overall, you should try to make some time up to it. Would've been great. It's not too shabby though.
Keep surviving, for now.

Not bad for just 2 weeks and making something unfamiliar to your normal kind of animation. I like u scottwjsmmm <3

scottwjsm responds:

Thanks! :D

I normally don't like animations without much plot & are just action, but something about this was really fun, and I can't quite put my finger what it is. It might be that the action just flows really well, and there's a lot of variety in the shots. I think your style could use a bit of polishing up, but it already has a lot of charm. Good job man

scottwjsm responds:

Thanks this is the first time I ever attempted an action!! I focused a bit too much on the different variety of shots and should have put more into the character animation, glad you like it

Dude, we're the only ones who posted something for our bracket! More chance we'll move on right? Haha, I don't know how I'll be able to stay in this tournament with school coming up next month. I'm secretly hoping you win for that reason :P

But anyway, I thought this was awesome! It was so ambitious, it's crazy! I think that's what made it look a little bad though. You tried to jam too much awesomeness in it that you didn't consider the time constraint. I really liked the camera shots you chose. It makes the movement really easy to follow (eg. you show the whole building falling apart and slanting after showing the guy sliding down a piece of rock. I was thinking "how is he sliding down?" And then you show how in the next shot. Stuff like that. It's good.) Good luck on moving to the next round!

scottwjsm responds:

Wow thanks I had no idea because I was just about to start watching the rest of the other entrys. I'm surprised I got this to a finished point it needs more touching up but I was out of time. I think your entry has a good chance of moving to the next round

hahaha this was so funny! I don't know if it was intentional but I was laughing out loud most of the time. like when he takes out a big ol leg of ham from the box hahaha. And when the rocks all somehow land on the pirate haha

good job man

scottwjsm responds:

Thanks I'm glad you liked it!

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Jul 17, 2015
12:06 AM EDT
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