The Thirteenth Crusade Ep. 4 (Part 2)

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As the infected horde lays waste to the crusader army, Jasper begs Augustine for aid. Meanwhile, Paul, Mike, and Charles fight desperately to escape the infected mist.

Link to episode 4 part 1: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/660355
Link to episode 5: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/660455

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Incredible! This episode proves once and for all that Augustine and the Templar by extension are sociopaths who don't care at all for anybody else but the Church. Also, Mike's death saddened me and makes me he lived, especially when I remember what he said about his sisters and mother. Also, Paul's insane laughter at the end reminds of Light Yagami laughing insanely near the end of Death Note. You did a fantastic job overall!

You know, this series kinda remind me of Warhammer 40k.

Think about it:

Infected= Tyranids

The White Templar= Space Marines

The Black Templar= Imperial Guards

I can't explain why but i hate charles the most out of your main characters, found Mike more interesting than him, kind of wish Charles got killed off instead because he seems less interesting, just my personal opinion though.

The scene with the black 'wolf'? seemed a bit anti climatic, expected something more drawn out instead of it just being shot and killed, was kind of expecting it to be wounded and escape, coming back at a later time when Paul is strong enough to slay it, otherwise it may aswell have been just another white version.

That being said i was still compelled to watch all the episodes thus far so you must be doing something right.

UniversalHeat responds:

Thanks for the critique! Yeah, I made this series a while ago and I'm also starting to notice a lot of its flaws. Hopefully Charles becomes more likable as the series progresses :) Yeah, that whole subplot with the black wolf kinda got dropped, and I really wish I'd written it into having a larger role in the story given how large a role it plays in these two episodes. Anyway, I'm glad you're still watching! Episode 5 is up now: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/660455

Man, you are keep surprising me in every next episode, I am really waiting for the next episode. And keep up the good work

Loving This Series, Keep Up The good Work

UniversalHeat responds:

Thanks man. Episode 5 should be up tomorrow, so stay tuned!

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4.70 / 5.00

Jul 7, 2015
12:32 PM EDT