Unexpected Repair

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Lonely lady was travelling through the country when suddenly her car broke down on the desert road. So she have to ask for a favour in local repair shop... A handy man works there and he need not only money


not impressed

this one of last times i trust people who send me links............

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Story is way too cliche.
Dialogue jump from one end to the other way too fast.
Need work on drawing anatomy.

Keep practicing.

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Sorry, but I think it is quite a bad one.

The story is unoriginal (a beautiful young lady fucks a mechanic... porn movies from the 80's were already tired of this "plot").

As for the drawings... well, better proportions would help. The picture of the naked woman spreading her legs and going full "fuck me please" is symptomatic of this glaring issue.

I hope you go on perfecting your drawing skills.

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This was good but there's that gap that confuses me.. from asking a kiss to full on nude.. but this was good, not bad.. but a little confusing.. good job :3

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1.87 / 5.00

Jul 3, 2015
11:19 AM EDT
Simulation - Dating