While speed draws are allowed, this is very slow and waaaay too long. I'd suggest making it into a speed paint; your screen capture software should have that option. But as for this, I can't get behind it. It's just way too long and drawn out, and I'm not sure it even qualifies as acceptable Newgrounds material.
One author who does a lot of speed-paints is mysticskillz: http://mysticskillz.newgrounds.com/movies/
If you'd like to see some speed draws in action, watch some that he's put up. Also, hang out on Newgrounds a while and learn what we do here. that way, you'll have a better idea of how we do things, and what will go over well. :)