overall, pretty good.
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This is my first animation. It's really not that good but I learned a lot in flash by making it. The only thing that's hard to get a hang of now is the smoothing and stuff going of off the stage when I export it. If anyone has tips on how to fix these I'd like to know how. The original audio comes from Sleepycabin's website.
Here's a link to the audio:http://sleepycabin.com/audio/sleepycast-05/
MegazoidNG responds:
No, no not really. It's only my first.
Some parts are okay but for the most part I feel it's mostly tweened. Also I think it might be a bit better if you got rid of the intro because it seems like filler. (I know that you want to introduce Sleepycabin and give them credit but for the most part I feel that the community knows who they are.) I think if you keep animating you could do some great stuff though! Also, it may be my computer, but why is there a long blank frame that's dragged out? Also I recommend that you add more backgrounds on some blank frames and a bit of value.
MegazoidNG responds:
Thanks, I'll try to look up some flash tutorials to become better at animation.