Haha, this was hilarious. I really don't know what I can critique you on. Maybe on the fact that you could've added some animation on the presentations? But still, the animation on the main character himself was pretty great. Good luck on moving to the next round!
Jake's Presentation
June 13, 2015 –January 16, 2020
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
Author Comments
Made this in 2 and a half weeks, came out pretty good by the fact that I had three tests in school.
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That was really good dude! Damn, I've got some serious competition haha
I have a good laugh from this. thank you.
Dat ending roflmao.
This is really impressive for 2 and 1/2 weeks between three tests, but I wanted to quickly suggest something in case you do this gag again:
for Fact number 4, when the teacher is going down the check list - have the camera zoom in on the first 5 choices - and then when the teacher goes to check the last one, have the camera quickly pan down to the last choice"your hopeless" - it's more funnier that way XD.
Otherwise this was really well done.
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- 4.55 / 5.00