I don't understand the language used for this submission; However, a certain bit of extra humor may be lost in translation.
Your usage of subtitles to create an english translation was greatly appreciated.
I love how you used the subtitles to enhance gags.
This was a very silly cartoon.
I just have one area of criticism.
Your character designs for the two protagonists were heavily influenced by anime.
I'd be interested in seeing your own twist applied to the anime style.
Borrow from multiple sources of inspiration such as other cartoons, live action, ect.
Experiment with your drawings to create different sort of looks.
This movie was very random.
Might as well create a random drawing styles to go along with it.
Have fun creating your new movies and always try new things.