Great stuff
And once again we have another great story here maybe a little bit too short but I still found it funny and entertaining maybe you could ad more to this like some special effects that could really jump out at you with some amazing things but that's just my opinion it's actually pretty good as is the story was notbad the character was cool and I like how this all players out so nice work here I look forward to more
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some explosive effects that jump out at you would be awesome
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