00:00
00:00
Become a supporter

Flea Bitten Monkee Opener

Share Collapse

Author Comments

Experimenting with a short opening animation for future projects.
Animated in Adobe Flash CS4

Reviews


Do not submit this sort of thing. There is no content and nothing of interest worth watching. Once you've made an actual movie to put after this, then you can upload it.



I would love to see the rest of it, you got talent.


Squirrelman82 responds:

Thanks Skullfather!


Sweet animation


Squirrelman82 responds:

Thanks!!


Really fun! I love the monkey design and there's some great stuff in there with the tongue and tail!
The back arm feels awkward just hanging there with everything else moving, maybe plant it on the ground.
Good work!


Squirrelman82 responds:

THanks for the feedback!


The animation is passable, but it goes on for too long. As an intro it should really only be about four or five seconds at most. Also, you've come up with a decently clever name, so you don't need to try and be clever with the font for it and the text layout. For its length, the name should just be simple and easy to read.

I know you want to make your intro really elaborate and clever, but it should really be quick. If you're putting it in front of all the stuff you do, people will be watching it over and over and over. Don't let them get bored with it! Spend the extra time and slowness inside the projects, not the intro.

I did like the monkey idea, you could change what he's up to if you want to vary your intro a bit later.


Squirrelman82 responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

Click on an icon to vote on this!

Credits & Info

Views
868
Votes
161
Score
2.40 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 23, 2015
4:31 PM EDT
Genre
Experimental
Tags