Some good work here
So here looks like you have a nice story and the story has some good energy and style so props to you for taking the time and putting fourth a good effort here. The voices we're pretty good also and the animation developed over the course of the flash and all these things made for a decent little series birth so nice job there and I do hope to see more of this as it was pretty entertaining
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Solid stuff here and doesn't need changes
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