3 stars from me
I made this short movie last year June whilst at College. It was part of a 20 minute anthology film called "The Triangle Of Strange Occurrences" containing 3 short films and a trailer. I didn't think it was a good idea to upload since most of the segment weren't really "animated" since they were just motion tween of still images kinda like this one.
It may look over-hyped as fuck but I had to get this done for my Media College Final Major Project at the time.
After the film was finished I was told that I couldn't show this infront of the class no matter how much i attempted to tone down the content, this may be the cause of all the sexual innuendos, Racial humour and homicidal jokes that i sneaked in. I did get a destinction for project which is the highest grade you can get, but the tutors told me the movie was worth viewing of a audience of adults only. In my opinion it would of been worth a rating of maybe a PG-13 since the content in this wasn't really worth a 18+ rating.
Click the link below to watch the video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AivgKhc-TeE
3 stars from me
The humour is pretty great with great timing and jokes but the animation wasn't so good, not to mention sometimes we'd hear static when Parky talked.
If you'd try making a new more polished version of this animation i think it would fare much better and get a higher score.
Read the description as well
um... yeah... nvm i think you understand...
What?
It's really hard to understand some parts of the audio, the artist could help by moving the mic a little farther away because some parks get a little screamy, which is fine, it just becomes very hard to understand at times. Also, pay attention when rendering a piece of art into a photo because some of the white dots surrounding it are a bit noticeable. Keep practicing!
I thought it was creative.