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Astro Jump

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You are a cube bot that is travelling through the asteroid belt. While flying you can pick up some gears to temporarily speed up. This is the first game I made.

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It could be so much better. My main concern is that as you continue, your "cube bot" gets smaller to the point where the player can no longer see it. There's no way to get hurt, so you can only continue jumping until you give up. Even after you stop jumping and fall out of view, the game continues. There is no proper way to "die" as the asteroids do not injure you. If they did, some major tweaking would need to happen, as they are too big and move too fast for the player to react until the "cube bot" gets to be pixel-sized. Also, poor presentation made me believe I was going to be playing a platformer, but when I fell through the asteroids I thought it was a dodging game, and when I took no damage, I lost all reason to continue playing. On a lighter note, the music is nice. I would've chosen a different font though. The current one is somewhat hard to decipher.

Needs improvement:
* You don't always respawn when falling off
* The game starts very fast paced - if you didn't read the instructions you loose right away
* Might be a Unity WebGL problem, but the game doesn't load for me 3 out of 4 times
* There's a spelling error on the Game Over screen
* The speed up / speed down is jumpy, doesn't react everytime the buttons are pressed
* A way to keep track of your previous distance would be neat

Good:
I see you got the distance counter and the repeating platforms right

It has potential but, right now in this current state it's very glitchy I had to reload the game three times before it played and some times when you fall the game keeps going without the game over page appearing.

Its not that thoughtful you can spacebar jump the whole thing without comin bac down

Not bad, add some moosic in teh background an it'll be cooler ^~^

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3.13 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 15, 2015
4:02 PM EDT
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