This is quite nice. Needs more work but ye it's cool
After William Singh (Bruce Gounder) has lost everything, in a fit of rage he murders members of the skull gang. Placed into prison, William is approached by Detective Rome (Jerome Naidu), to help him in the fight against a man called David Blak, leader of the skulls. And in return, the location of his daughters will be revealed.
This is quite nice. Needs more work but ye it's cool
boring
Hey i think you meant to submit to youtube or something, this site is for flash.y
I dig it, not bad for a first video and hope to see more from you guys.
Decent short film. First, I have to say that "violent films" are less "real" than normal ones ^^
I'll pass some technical problem probably due to the camera (shaking, sound too low or saturating). Actors, without being great actors, at least have personality and are easily identified. I would just add that shots are globally to close (pretty hrad to identify the space), and it's generally a little slow. But still nice job !
I appreciate your response and will take everything you've said as a guideline. As this is a rough edit and will be done better.