"The Monster"

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Climbed again this animated short, since the first time I had climbed mistakes, this time is improved, I hope you like it.


well done !
i like it

HMarioProductionsH responds:

Thank you very much, glad you liked it.

This is kind of a crazy story about someone lost in darkness who becomes possessed by the very thing that he is battling. And I dont know if I am correct in assuming this, but I believe the goat sound is an obvious reference to general evil and darkness, the Goat is one of many creatures used in allegories to describe evils.

The animation in this isnt bad at all. I feel that the lighting effects maybe could have been a little better. The light doesnt effect the environment and you should see it reflecting off of the walls since it is a cave. But I dont animate, so who am I to tell you how to do it, lol.

Good work on this though. 4/5

HMarioProductionsH responds:

your comment is very well drawn and detailed, I appreciate the effort you made to review my video, it took several details in this animation but thanks to comments like this can percatarme and improve the animation next, cheer is very entertaining, I would recommend it you tried :)

This reminded me of one of the first dungeon crawlers
before the Diablo saga. It was bad. you had to go into
the deepest darkest dungeon with only torches and
the kept going out. Run out of torches and you were
so screwed. It was so bad, I forgot the name of it.

HMarioProductionsH responds:

thanks I guess , an opinion would have been more efficient to improve my projects.

Ooh I remember this one! Wish the other one was still online so I could go back and compare and really see the differences (could change the name on that to something like 'The Monster (Original)'... maybe? But it does feel improved! The darkness is more perceptible this time around, I imagine there's more sound; atmosphere, and the monster jumping into the girl at the end... feels like it ended differently last time, though I can't remember how? Overall looks good!


HMarioProductionsH responds:

I wish I had not deleted the old one, but did not want to have both versions at the same time I had to do it that way , and if it just slightly different , thanks for noticing friend .

Not bad, but why the goat sound?

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it was just a small detail

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3.44 / 5.00

May 9, 2015
12:35 AM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place May 10, 2015