I like how both voice actors got married IRL. <3
Author Comments
Two thieves try to rob a store, but not as a team. And now they must try to steal the crystal for only one of themselves.
This is my very first flash that I made in animation class, and will most likely be my only flash.
It's not bad, but there wasn't that much of a point to it.
I like your background at the start of the movie.
The overall movie could use a bit more color in places since a lot of the drawings were black outlines.
A lot of the color was mostly white with a few exceptions in areas such as lasers, eye pupils and others.
You made the common mistake of drawing your city as a series of squares with windows.
An actual city is full of complex structures of a variety of shapes.
A city is actually very hard to draw.
I like your many uses of camera angles and you used a few smear frames at some point.
The guy falling down used smear frames when his hands were going crazy.
The jewel was created using the gradient feature of flash.
I hope this review gives you plenty of useful information for future improvement.
Best of luck with your new movies.
-Mightydein
for your first attempt it's not that bad. You should make more.