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The Heist

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Two thieves try to rob a store, but not as a team. And now they must try to steal the crystal for only one of themselves.

This is my very first flash that I made in animation class, and will most likely be my only flash.

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I like how both voice actors got married IRL. <3

It's not bad, but there wasn't that much of a point to it.

I like your background at the start of the movie.

The overall movie could use a bit more color in places since a lot of the drawings were black outlines.

A lot of the color was mostly white with a few exceptions in areas such as lasers, eye pupils and others.

You made the common mistake of drawing your city as a series of squares with windows.

An actual city is full of complex structures of a variety of shapes.

A city is actually very hard to draw.

I like your many uses of camera angles and you used a few smear frames at some point.

The guy falling down used smear frames when his hands were going crazy.

The jewel was created using the gradient feature of flash.

I hope this review gives you plenty of useful information for future improvement.

Best of luck with your new movies.

-Mightydein

for your first attempt it's not that bad. You should make more.

Credits & Info

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1,110
Faves:
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Votes
5
Score
4.61 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 5, 2015
12:26 PM EDT
Genre
Action