Not bad for a first animation, just keep making more and more stuff man. You'll only get better.
I liked it. There was a nice charm to it. You should work on adding a bit of color to future ones since it helps to immerse the viewer. It wouldn't hurt to get a better microphone either. You've got the humor anyway, which is more than can be said for a lot of submissions of late. Good job, keep em coming! :)
Thanks so much for the constructive criticism and encouragement, pretty much still my first submission!
ha, Pretty bad visuals but was pretty funny.you you get it!