I'm sorry I almot never give negative reviews, but the audio was just terrible! Even if could understood your language, I'd still have no idea what's going on. Keep at it though, get better recording space next time.

At times, I couldn't hear a god-damn word.
At other times, it felt like my ears were bleeding.
The animation is equivalent to pre-2008 Eddsworld, but by judging by the voice actor(s), you sound very young.
I can tell, if you are willing to put more time and effort into this, you might just become something big.
Until then, good luck.