Fantastic background design, appropriate sound effects, good voice acting, smooth transitions good camera angles used within the movie.. That was a very distinctive animation style for what I usually see for stories like this which was fascinating. Excellent facial expressions for each line. 7:00 That was a really cool camera angle, I don't really see that often. 7:43 That was awesome work with the hair physics. At 8:45 and 8:49 their faces are hilarious! At 3:02, I would take a beat for that line. Lip sync could use some work as well, even though I can imagine using this animation style is difficult. Voice acting also seems a bit amateurish at times as in I don't really see the lines delivered in the tone they would usually be, not sure if that's suppose to be comical or not but I'll take a half star off for that. Still a concrete job though, especially for the first episode.