If the Narrorator would talk a little bit louder i might of cared what her said. i kind of just zoned out his voice because it was not interesting enough
great movie but..
What is up with the music at the end? i could help if you need someone to compose music for you
very good graphics
Good Movie. Good Setting
The main concern is the weakly narrated voicing. You'd probably have to turn up your speakers to hear it. The rest of it is smoothly done.
This has a lot of potential. Your flash graphics are great and your emulation of 3D using 2D is really good. Unfortunately... the voice killed this. I too couldn't understand what they were saying. It sounds like you used some effect to drop the pitch of the voice... but this makes it really hard to understand (unless you are a sound God). The music and ambience throughout the whole thing was great (except that piano at the end... it was painful! Take it out!). I loved your camera shots and angles. Maybe try some faster cuts to give counterpoint to the slower scenes? I dunno... just trying to help. I would also like to say that people who blammed this really aren't being very condsiderate... or objective because there's a LOT of shit on the portal that deserves to be blammed and this is not one of them. Keep up the good work (but fix that sound!)...