Nice animation, very smooth!
I can't wait to see the completed version! :D

Your character art is appealing, but this just feels like you uploaded a quarter finished project to the portal. Feels more like something you should but into your Dumping Grounds and then post a thread in the Animation Forum for Feedback.

What you have here is interesting, but I can't give you anything other then a blam. I would like to see a totally finished product from you though. Good day.

I really liked the way it looked. It's really rough, but it's obviously a work in progress. Hopefully it gets music and audio in the future as well.