Pretty cute. Take out the comma, and your grammar is golden. Nicely done for an E-card!
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first completed Flash project. Uploaded here so I can show my buddies. All art/animation by me.
Scream FX: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/524067
Music: ""Halloween Waltz LOOP" by Curtis S.D. Macdonald
Whoosh FX: http://www.flashkit.com/soundfx/Mayhem/Knife_Sword/Sword_sw-Dyed-8959/index.php
mgwall responds:
Good catch, I'll fix that. Thank you!
not exactly Halloween yet
regardless, a nice job for a first flash, this isn't bad. its short but drawn well, although you could have given the headless man better movement. The music is good too.
If i where you though i would add more slash lines, because with just the two directions repeating it seems a bit off.
mgwall responds:
Ah yes, it had to be some sort of holiday, and Halloween is my favorite. I still have some time left before I need to turn it in, thank you for your suggestions, I'll implement them. Thank you!