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I failed to make a story, but at least I tried ! So, here it is, the story of a man escaping an ( alien ? ) attack

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No no. You told a story. Its a weird one and a bit fast paste for me but you showed me a tale about a hunter getting the plot twist knocked out of him. :)

Mostly the problem is that it's incoherent and disjointed. You can get one star for the effort and that the horse showed up at the end to seek revenge. Other than that, it seems more like a series of almost started projects flashing from one to the next after you'd given up on all of them.
Here's a tip, from the start of a project as ambitious as animation, create a storyboard first. Then you have a retainable idea to follow. When you've gotten tired of something, just set it aside and take a break. There's no reason to make it harder on yourself than you have to. Some of these animators represent and post for whole groups working together, so don't beat yourself up if you can only get one decent post every couple of months.
AND remember to breathe and give yourself the space and time to grow. You can break down the storyboard into bite-size chunks so you can handle it and then compile the whole thing together in order when it's done.

papypoulpe responds:

Thanks for the advice, I think a storyboard is a good idea indeed, I'll take my time to make a reliable sketch for the next time, and hold onto it, thank you again and have a nice tea :)

LOL XD.. It's good ;D

I struggled to get the story but. I'm loving your animation style.

papypoulpe responds:

Thanks ! :)

Not sure what happened there?

papypoulpe responds:

Yep, me neither ! Actually I'm training so It's quite frequent that I delete parts of the animation, and it end up like this, something strange that doesn't really have a sense :p But hey ! Someday, maybe I'll make something good ! Have a nice day w+o*19

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Uploaded
Mar 12, 2015
9:18 AM EDT
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