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I have not animated in over a year an this just a test demo for future animation. I wanted to see if i still got it .
I know you want the action to be quick, even quicker than the human eye... At the same time, (and maybe a frame-rate issue) things get a little... over-spaced if you can follow my meaning. When the characters would reverse positions (a basic strategic move) for fluidity, I might suggest you work them a little closer together for the fluidity. Let them separate naturally... The flashy screen and suddenly they're opposite from where they started is a little old and used up.
On the whole, I think you still got it. Might be kind of like riding a bike, once you get it, you might get rusty and awkward, but you don't lose it. You have a talent, and I'm not going to beat it up on a lack of story or drama or... (we can just say blah-blah-blah) You get the point, and I know it's just a demo.
The art work was clean, sounds were on time, and everything seemed crisp and smooth for the most part. I think a little polish (even a spit shine might do...lol) and you could stick together a storyline and run with it.
Not too bad as a demo. The scene transitions were abrupt and it seemed like there could have been a few more frames when the fighters were throwing each other around. Still, would be interested in seeing a more complete project from you.
You still got it.
You lose some points because it was a little too short, though.
But don't give it any mind; you've got something great goin' here.
Now do something even better!
The demo was very good. It looks to be a little wonky when you did a cut scene to change the action movement but overall. I say you still have it and hope to see more pixel animation from you soon.
This is pretty good for a test. The animations are smooth and the audio is clear. All you need is a good story to tie it all together. That being said, this is still a test which is better placed in the dumping grounds but this is good enough to stand on its own. Decent job.
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