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This is my first animated film so don't be mean :D
WTF?... Still love it!
I respect that this is your first video, but you might want to find a friend or 2 to help record the voices. Still pretty rough, but with some practice, you'll be making the front page in no time.
The animation and audio are of poor quality and the gore and poop weren't funny. Also, is this really your first animation? You posted movies on Newgrounds before this, so it's either that this is the first animation you made and posted it after several latter works, or you are lying to get sympathy. No one likes a liar.
on my YouTube channel you can see that this was my first animation
Not bad for a first one....but nothing made any sense. The animation was decent enough, but you should use text for words instead of hard to make out hand written stuff.
I get this is your first cartoon, so here's some stuff you could work on. Everything looks like it was drawn once without any thought. If you didn't have any construction lines when animating, have very rough animated images and clean it up on top, but for your first cartoon, the movements seem to be getting there. Include a background, doesn't have to be the most detailed and best looking, just something to let us know where the characters are, it brings it more to life. The audio wasn't very pleasent. And have a story! This just seemed like random pokemon nonsense, misty says something then gets shot and stabbed...kay!? uumm...how is that a spin on pokemon, how is that a joke? I don't want you to be discouraged by this, but try and learn from other cartoons, learn the basics and maybe you can have your own Disneyland, but with your name instead.
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