Alright, the humor in this one is spot on. The timing of the punch-lines is a little off, but it still cuts the cake.
I have no questions that you are a good animator. The only thing left to do is polish your animations.
Audio quality does need work, but audio is very expensive to produce, so i understand limitations.
I prefer cartoons with grace, but I get it. very funny!
I like it, except for the audio.
Love it. But you should fix the audio.