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A fight in an empty place

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rated 1.98 / 5 stars
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Action
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fight
kirby
swords
kirbyfight

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Uploaded
Feb 15, 2015 | 7:57 PM EST

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Author Comments

I do not own anything! The music belongs to steven universe "Dance of Swords"

I made this in my spare time, but please do not rate harshly im a new animator yet i would like to receive criticism, if you like the video rate and follow me. THX!

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p0wnagenessp0wnageness

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

You got good ideas. Keeping making stuff till you're good at it.


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Bulbasore responds:

Thank you, i will keep trying to improve myself!


GlugglorGlugglor

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

That was pretty good for just starting out. Here is some criticism since you wanted it. I would recommend using sound effects and some more shadow details to your characters, so they don't look as flat. Also, nice choice of music. Steven Universe is amazing.


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Bulbasore responds:

Thank you for the criticism i will consider these good ideas next time im at the drawing board.

By the way thx i love steven universe even if its a kids show , the music is amazing!


BlackKitsune42BlackKitsune42

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

The animation was decent but could use some polishing. All in all, decent job.



Toxic-ShredderToxic-Shredder

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I would say this is a good start for a new animator, but not upload-worthy. The music doesn't fit the theme, and artwork seems a bit rushed, and anything where a Kirby is sliced in half should make baby pandas cry. The animation itself was quite fluid. I would say work on making the artwork a bit more symmetrical, and changing the music to something a bit more "epic battle-y"


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Bulbasore responds:

Thank you for you perspective on my animation. kirby being sliced in half was kinda funny to me because i would not think that would happend!