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Hi there, this is my second animated video..
I want to know that is it improved from the last one or the last one was better?
Check it here.. :- :)
Cute for what it is. I assume you're young, so I'll go easy on you. Start by keeping a proper aspect ratio throughout the piece. There is no reason why I should see white bars. Your animation is competent, but nothing special, especially since the sprites aren't made by you. Lastly the story... um... you'll improve with time.
Thank you for your encouragement. I am trying to improve it and working hard. :) I have edited it to the real size. :)
Let's Fighting Love.
The story seemed a bit rushed but at least the animation was smooth and the audio was good. Decent job overall.
I have made this series to improve my flash experience. When it gets completed (3 parts), I will make a series with much better story-line and animation. :)
decent for a flash. But, there are quite a few complaints; the story is bland, combat gets a little repitive and boring, and the voice acting is bad. I know it's your second flash video but i have to give you my honest opionion
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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