Not really sure if you intended this as a satire or comical... It got either really "dry" or relatively "dark" pretty quick... and that might be the intent behind it. If I was to offer something constructive, I'd have to suggest more jumping up and down (by the main character) and even a ranting and raving (audio) fit about the "stepping in it" as it might be.
Your technique is well conceived and decently delivered. You'd have a 5/5 on skill with this for no more than it is, but it... well... it is what it is, and you've (frankly) done no more than you've done.

Well that got dark fast

At first I thought it was going to be a comedic short but once I saw the photo I had no idea where this was going and after having watched this twice, I'm still not sure what this is supposed to be. It's not very funny and it doesn't really stir any emotions in me but it was pretty well animated

okay watched 3 seconds and im good. perfect!