what a magical land of constant killing!

It's okay, as far as sprite movies go. You really need sound effects, and actual speech bubbles, as the text blends in with the background way too much. Voice acting would be nice, too. I also felt like this went way too fast as far as the dialogue and the action, with there not being a clear dividing line between the two. Also, use more than just one music track over the whole thing, it makes it feel like it's a montage rather than an animation.

Couldn't really grasp the story between the fast text and the colors clashing.

as this is your first animation. i feel bad for rating it so low, its a good idea, and story. but i have suggestions for improvement. first i think you should try different perspective angles. like when the characters are talking, you have them close up instead of so far away in a field. and when they fight close up a bit too. have the perspective follow what you want us to see, but remember to leave juuuust enough room so we can enjoy the scenery from time to time too. I also recommend you use more than one song, use multiple songs for each scene to help get a feel for the emotion you wish us to feel as we watch. i also suggest some sound effects and perhaps voice acting? the voice acting is not fully needed. but its one way to go :) Good Luck!! I hope i helped and did not offend.