pretty awesome my friend (: !
Not bad, but the fact it's an intro leaves a lot for improvement - no preloader and kind of a choppy frame rate along with that one awkward camera pan to the left makes it seem more like a cheesy sprite movie. Keep it up though, but release full content next time.
this is the first one of these I actuily like. but it still only a intro so no full score. good job tho.
For the gap of time you've been on newgrounds, I have to say it was decently animated and the pacing was good on the movements of the sprites. Obviously it wasn't mind-blowing but I'm confident in your potential otherwise.