pretty awesome my friend (: !
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It's been two years since I've posted anything on newgrounds, 2014 was dreadful so I hope to put out a bit more now that I'm in the groove again, this little project is the first of many projects, working on a collab and other projects. I made this for my brother as he wanted to start learning flash & wanted a intro. Critiques are always welcome like I've always say they are a key learning tool.
Pretty cool!
this is the first one of these I actuily like. but it still only a intro so no full score. good job tho.
For the gap of time you've been on newgrounds, I have to say it was decently animated and the pacing was good on the movements of the sprites. Obviously it wasn't mind-blowing but I'm confident in your potential otherwise.
Animation is smooth, the title should came last, and the text need to stand out more. Adjust the scream volume down, and last I don't think it's a good idea to upload intros and test to the portal. If you want people to see a sample of your work just upload it into the dump bin and add a link to it. Overall not bad.
Lazarus115 responds:
Thanks Mystic it's been a while since I've posted anything so I wanted to post something simple but can't wait to see your part for the collab :)