kind of strange in a way but it was kinda good,

I don't really know what this was supposed to be about... Just some video about a guy who's internet isn't working well and just some zoom-ins on his eye and nose & mouth... Quite boring.

this is how my school computer works

Well honestly the thing I noticed in your animation first was the fact that you have a lot of repetition. You constantly seem to be reusing the eye and nose shot which is fine but, it makes it seem almost "lazy"? I dunno. Anyways the joke is kinda funny but, it's delivered in such a drawn out way that takes away a lot of the actual humor of the whole animation. I don't think you did too badly. I hope that you continue to improve and make better animations as you further your career as an artist.

ok.....