"heres ur receipt and enjoy ur fruitcake" ..... "uhh, you too." ----->FFFUUUUUUUUUU
Just goes to show that some people just can't catch a break. Good job with the video.
I liked the animation overall, especially Brandon freaking out inside his head. The only drawback was the audio being a unclear in some areas, like Misti's dialogue for example. Other than that I really enjoyed it.
This wasnt bad at all. I see that you have a lot of potential in terms of your animation skills. You also have a nice art style. The only thing I could give some advice on.. is that you may want to find a way to improve your audio quality of the cartoon. You might need a better mic or maybe you just need some better editing software. Im not sure, but If the audio was crisp and clean for the animation then it would greatly enhance the overall viewer experience. Voice acting was decent, there were times where I felt it couldve been played out a bit better. Also the overall humor of the cartoon wasnt bad either, but I felt like it was lacking in some areas and needs to have something a little more sporadic to keep the viewers watching. Other than that though, you have a lot of good potential and this was a nice piece of animation. Just keep practicing and learning from others so that you can keep getting better! Hope you found this at least a little helpful! Thanks and good luck
I'll keep that in mind, thanks dude!