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original story and artwork and voicing was done by kinenz
this is my first animation project so i was learning as i went along o-o
I rate it 4 stars in a sense that it delivered a decent animation with a peaceful story line that would seem suitable for kids. I cant say much else about it for now other than what most of everyone else already said, but I will say this... if animation is your passion then by all means keep making them! You did a good job and I wish you luck
super thank you ^_^ there's still a fair amount of people who never grow up though :3
Oh god it's a moeblob. <->
On a little more serious of a note... I like the animation, even if it is simple. The outlines around everything give it that sort of storybook feel, and so does the narrator. I did like that little burst of flowers, though! It looked nice, but I missed on the first time watching.
It is very cute, but I think a little bit more of a background (Lollipops are popular. You could draw sweet pea green hills, and stuff, I feel like it would make the animation better.)
The voice might need to go along a little more smoothly with the animation, the little pauses are weird. (Maybe in those you could make an animation of flipping a page.)
Other than that, a sweet surprise.
i couldn't do much about the narration since i picked it up the audio from work done by kinenz 3 months ago.
i found the narration to be a little fast paced in some places so that one scene got all explosive and chaotic.
thank you for your ideas (>'o'<) wow! sweat peas :3
although, it might be a little difficult doing the page fllipping thing. i only have adobe flash cs6 so there is a limit to what i can do with my animation. at least until i can afford other editting programs.
A cute animation although it would be even better if it had some audio. Decent job overall.
i was thinking so too. i will try on the next installment
It's so cute and sweet...!!!!!
Aw, what a cute little critter! :3 Voice acting goes along well with that cuteness, seems a bit kiddish a tale, but who knows, maybe there'll be unexpected twists as the adventure moves onward! Nice work so far!
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