Keep it up!
I thought I'd make newer version of the movie I made that I didn't like for many reasons.
Keep it up!
First of all, half of this was not even in stop motion. You need to keep it in stop motion other than just recording it. Secondly, if you want to give credit to people who were involved in this, you need to do it in the ending instead of in the middle of the video where it takes up like 1/3 of the screen. And lastly, the stop motion itself needs some work. At some point in the frames, a camera pops up when it shouldn't be there. Just keep improving, and I'm sure you'll do great. Good luck!