was this 2 fps?
Where do I start:
1. The animation is too choppy. It really needs work.
2. Alot of the backgrounds were small to the point of seeing white on the sides. Learn to stretch out the backgrounds.
3. Make sure the dialogue is in the camera shots at all times. Sometimes the words are cut off, so you don't know what they're saying.
4. I'd recommend Swivel so your animation is not on loop.
Hope you read this and take my advice.
I like much your flash game.
I hope to see the next part. awesome!
Not bad still needs a little work on how the animation style flows it seems a bit choppy but I am not a flash artist so I call it as I see it.
Well, for the starters, the frame is lacking, and the spelling is kind of hard to see. I see improvments in the future. Keep it up!
I may do some changes and make it a little bit long thanks I'll keep up the good work. I'm going need your help whenever I do these animation videos.