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Tim the salesman

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rated 3.63 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original
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Uploaded
Nov 30, 2014 | 2:09 AM EST

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Tim the salesman is a short cartoon about tim becoming a telemarketer to pay for stuff he broke at home.

I've been working on this for a while so I'm pretty glad I'm done. On to the next better project!

Link to my youtube
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCr7C3mqieVrSciSILyECyLQ

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GianniGianni

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I really expected an inheritance point, but I'm so glad you didn't give one. The abrupt cut made it a much more hilariously grim ending purely because of the expectation, the idea is never even acknowledged despite how obvious it is, and even though this may have never been intentional, it skyrockets this animation's value for me.

Thought I recognized that classic voice. I was like "Aquaman? Is that you? Throwing children again, eh?"


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CyberdevilCyberdevil

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Maaan that quickly spiraled out of control! The pace seems to be jumping all over the red line every once in a while, but overall it was a fun trip, more so because some things do remain consistent! At the end there, I thought there'd be a joke on how they inherit all that money thanks to his fauly product sale, but that might've been a bit too brutal I guess. ;) Nice work!

-cd-


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Comicdud responds:

OH MAN! That would have been a much better ending, at least a more unifying ending int terms of how every other part was about trying to get money.

Thanks for the feedback about pacing and stuff, I appreciate the help!


CabzxCabzx

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Voice acting needs work, some parts are louder than others. I got a couple of jokes, maybe you should try going slow in some parts and faster in others, so as to create pase.

I recommend.


Comicdud responds:

It seems that overall pacing is a thing people noticed about this entry, so I'm glad to know that's something I should work on. Also you're right that audio wasn't equalized like it should have been.

thanks for the review!


metroidfannumber1metroidfannumber1

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Well this could have ended differently, especially on new grounds.

Lol! The boy caught her good!

The voices remind me of llamas with hats.