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Nov 29, 2014 | 9:44 AM EST
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This video took a pretty long time, i planned to post it like last month. And it STILL no where as good as wanted it to be. Hope you guy still like it though, cause I'm still pretty proud of it. There were a lot of new elements that i added that i didnt put in my previous cartoon, which placed a role in how long it took cause i had to figure things out at the same time. Too add on to that something happened so i had to uninstall a program and install a newer version of it just to continue the project, and the quality is shot. Anyway, thanks for the read and have an awesome day. wooo :)

and btw, I'm no voice actor, but hope these suffice. haha

Lastly this takes place after another video called ""Road"
so it might make more sense if you watch that first, or not.
But here it is:



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Well that was random! Glad to see the main character didn't actually die at the end there. For a moment I thought he died and then the script writer died but then... he was alive again? Slightly confusing, but that run was just packed with entertainment! The voice acting is strangely calm all the way through, and nost just emotionally calm but somehow toned down, for things that'd normally sound louder, like: laughs and screams. I guess that might be to prevent clipping, but it sounds kinda strange as well. :)

As for animation, some of the angles/movements look a bit strange, but overall it's smooth, and plotwise there's always something going on! Imagine if this creativity was combined with something more like an actual plot, one with meaning and motive! But it was fun! Thanks for the entertainment.


CosmicArt responds:

hahayea, there i still need to work on a lot of stuff, but i just hope its getting better. thanks for the comment :)


Rated 4 / 5 stars

"Now give me all your weiners!"

"My dog!"

Man that dead pan voice acting makes it hilarious. Well played!

CosmicArt responds:

haha thanks, i try :D


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

there's potential hear. Some of the action was pretty funny while other parts seemed random and senseless. These random parts generally suffered from poor timing and random periods of silence. The humor itself was mostly hit and miss. Consider using background music to enhance ambiance and getting a voice actor. There are plenty of talented people here at newgrounds who are willing to collaborate.

Despite the shortcomings I really did enjoy the parts that were funny.

CosmicArt responds:

thanks, yea i know -.- the project has been in the works for a while, so i kinda loss sight in the timing of things ect. and just wanted to put it out there. There were a lot of factors that almost didn't make me want to post it at all (mostly my editing software and computer problems) so I'm happy that its actually out here on the webs.
As for the collabs, maybe in the near future if i find anyone. :)


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I liked this, the animation was well done (although it looks a bit rushed) and the jokes were funny.
You just need to practice your voice acting a little more or get better voice actors.

CosmicArt responds:

thanks for the comment, haha a little or a lot practice, I'm trying to work on as many projects as i can so hopefully I'll get better. I usually record in my dorm room which has thins walls, so I'm usually iffy about being too loud, but I'm getting over it.