Well that was random! Glad to see the main character didn't actually die at the end there. For a moment I thought he died and then the script writer died but then... he was alive again? Slightly confusing, but that run was just packed with entertainment! The voice acting is strangely calm all the way through, and nost just emotionally calm but somehow toned down, for things that'd normally sound louder, like: laughs and screams. I guess that might be to prevent clipping, but it sounds kinda strange as well. :)

As for animation, some of the angles/movements look a bit strange, but overall it's smooth, and plotwise there's always something going on! Imagine if this creativity was combined with something more like an actual plot, one with meaning and motive! But it was fun! Thanks for the entertainment.

-cd-

"Now give me all your weiners!"

"My dog!"

Man that dead pan voice acting makes it hilarious. Well played!

there's potential hear. Some of the action was pretty funny while other parts seemed random and senseless. These random parts generally suffered from poor timing and random periods of silence. The humor itself was mostly hit and miss. Consider using background music to enhance ambiance and getting a voice actor. There are plenty of talented people here at newgrounds who are willing to collaborate.

Despite the shortcomings I really did enjoy the parts that were funny.

I liked this, the animation was well done (although it looks a bit rushed) and the jokes were funny.
You just need to practice your voice acting a little more or get better voice actors.