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the mic could have been better.
also i've seen so much of this shape of character, it's not original.
the end "please subscribe to me, i worked really hard on this!", sorry to say, but no one cares how much time you put into it.
i didn't see the whole point in this animation:that's probably why claymation isn't as popular as it was on NG.
it seemed very child like/nothing new or exciting.
your voice doesn't help either with this.
I did like some of the movement's as they were very smooth./but some were not.
Yeah thanks for the positive motivation, and I had no ideas for a unique clayman besides this one. It is more compact, easy, and faster than Knox's klayman, so don't hate on me for that.
By the way, so what if it's childish, I have done the best I could on this when I had the time. I can't always do the best at claymations, because to be honest, we all suck.....it's true no ones great, and no ones bad, we all just suck, no mean to sound mean by the way.
This one's better tha the first one. The biggest issues are the storylines and the volume control.
The story on this one was scattered, but still kinda humorous. Still, the stories in your submissions are in need of more meat. I suppose that may come with time.
One thing that can be quickly addressed is the volume. The intro is loud; the general talking is fine, or sometimes quiet, and then there's the into-the-mic screaming and sound effects that are not only loud, but often very annoying.
If you want to scream for something, fine. Just, back up from the mic a bit when you do it. You'll get the right pitch, without making it sound pretend, but you'll also avoid the volume spike. Then, check your audio. If it still spikes and bottoms, then adjust the levels in Audacity to even them out.
Don't give up. Keep working at it. With time and experience, you'll gain a lot of traction.
Thank you so much for the motivation dude! I'll work a lot harder!
I like stopmotion, :) you made a great job whit the animation and sound.
It's very funny but im sure you can do it better. keep working like that.
Thank you for the comment!
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