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Awesome Guy Episode 3

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the third episode of my awesomeguy series. sorry some of the sound effects cut out, i hate my computer. anyway in this installment awesomeguy has to hang out with his new friend at the mall, and then one thing leads to another...

(EDIT): this is a fixed version, i had some sound problems (and some grammar problems :P)

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WHERES THE 4TH VIDEO

Fun, really but... Needs to be longer X/

Nice dude Nice animation art style looks good and the voice acting sounds good

These need to be longer. A lot of what you want to do in the plot and where you want to take it feels rushed. Take as much time as you could ever possibly need getting these just right, we can wait, we're not going anywhere. Also, for Baby-Raptor-Christ's sake have your voice actors do more than one take on their lines, the majority of the actors do a good job, but some (I'm not gonna name any names) come off as tired, or bored. Stanley Kubrick once re-shot a scene over 100 times, that goes to show there's nothing wrong with pushing an actor to get the best performance possible.

That being said, I can see these getting better and better as they come. Your art is getting more defined and unique. The sound effects are more HQ, the audio is more crisp, the coloration is unsaturated but still contrasted which is very pleasing to the eye. The writing is getting more interesting, as well as humorous.

All-in-all, what we have, is great, it just needs some polishing, so standard fair for most developing artists. I hope the above paragraphs didn't come-off as douchey. Nice work, and keep 'em comin'!

~ Noob

TheUnseriousguy responds:

thanks, but i am a one man show here and while i would like to spend more time on them and make them longer, i have a lot of story planned that i would like to get to within the next few years, so i do have to rush parts, and Im not exactly paying my voice actors so its a bit of a tall order to do a take 100 times. I am working on improving all these things and i am spending longer on them, but i cant take as long as i would like unfortunately

Liking the series so far. Hope the next one comes out soon.

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